User blog comment:ToastUltimatum/Wiki Independence/@comment-1718103-20120522182158/@comment-1011118-20120522231525

I like where you're going with this, you got the cordiality down very well. However, I feel like there's too much ambiguity regarding what you want them to do. You've given them three options; cease production, improve quality, or give us proper credit. All three options are viable, but in our first contact with them, we should just offer them one. I recommend the cease option, that gives us room to negotiate, and realistically we might have to settle for something less.

Delete the thing about the Creative Commons and getting credited properly, and put in a passage where you say something like "I understand that we have no legal recourse, I'm asking you for this favour as one person to another." Keep in those passages that underscore how extremely extremely unlikely to get any sales, but take out the sentences that imply that you would be satisfied solely by them giving us credit or cleaning up the quality.

-my two cents.