User blog comment:RWfan/Series 9 Heat B/@comment-3046292-20111101094212

Aside from the spelling/grammatical errors it isn't too bad, even if some of it seems a little...unrealistic. Also, as far as I knew it was spelled Dantomkia without the extra capitals, and please don't abbreviate Beast of Bodmin to BOB or Revenge of Trouble and Strife to ROTS.